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Before You Had To Go by ~nimfh:iconnimfh:



You should've taught me
How to forget you
Before you left me here alone
You should've taught me
How to love someone else again
Before you had to go
'Cause right now I'm having the hardest time
Doing my best, pushing hard
Trying to forget you
Your every memory
Every smile and every while
I've spent with you
Wish it were easier
It would've been easier
If you taught me how
Before you had to go
©2007-2009 ~nimfh
:iconnimfh:

Author's Comments

This piece was inspired by one of my "greatest" yet most treasured heartbreaks. Written about almost 3 years ago. Comments are welcome and very much appreciated.

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This is really nice.
I particularly like how you repeat the:
'You should've taught me' phrase.
It works really well.
Just one tiff. Change 'Coz' to 'Cause'?
For a beautiful deep sad poem like this I think you should refrain from writing words that way.
:heart:

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